Hi, and welcome to Ashes in Your Path! This is and intermediate Warriors roleplay, based on the book series by Erin Hunter. We're getting the plot moving, so hopefully the site can move. Feel free to join, because we need more active members.
Congratulations to Jaystar, who is now leader of RiverClan! RiverClan deputy, ThunderClan deputy and medicine cat, and WindClan medicine cat are all open. Please apply!. Auditions will be up soon. Also Congrats to Lightningstar, who has just recieved his nine lives after Waterstar's death.
Make sure you read the Rules and make a biography before roleplaying!
Feel free to PM Kako, Cleo, or Fury if you have any questions. Just click on their names to PM them. A full staff list with all the leaders, deputies, and medicine cats is located in the rules.
Re: Affiliate « Result #1 on Apr 27, 2008, 1:45pm »
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Quick Info: There's not much to say yet, because FF is such a recently created site, we play the four original clans, and deputy and medicine cat positions are open for all clans, along with two mod spots.
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #2 on Apr 26, 2008, 3:46pm »
&. bats in the belfry
Batear followed Lightningstar and the rest of ThunderClan to Fourtrees, not questioning what Lightningstar was saying but in her mind thinking about how crazy this was. So, Lightningstar got a dream and all that hooey, and now the Clans were leaving. It didn't make much sense to Batear. Then again, staying when everyone was dying didn't make much sense to her, either.
&. quoth the raven
Ravenwing nodded at Frozenstar's words. The cats around him were strong ShadowClan warriors, without a doubt. They could survive the journey. No question. Proudly, the deputy followed Frozenstar to where the other Clans were already assembled. He listened as Lightningstar spoke. He wasn't too pleased with StarClan's choice; how could the newest leader--the ThunderClan leader--lead them to safety? Then again, Lightningstar leading them was better than no cat leading them at all.
&. blue jay flyin' high
The black tomcat calmly padded after Ravenwing, his blue eyes narrowed. Frozenstar was a trustworthy cat, in his opinion, but what about the ThunderClan cat that came to warn them? Probably they were speaking the truth, but there was still worry fluttering in Jaywing's mind. As ShadowClan reached Fourtrees, Jaywing surveyed the many cats around him, blue eyes stopping on each ShadowClan cat and on that other Jay- cat. Jaystar, that was it. Jaywing ignored most of what the leaders were saying, and instead kept gathering information about the cats present.
&. blackbird singing in the dead of night
Blackpaw still wasn't pleased with Jaystar, and her grey eyes were the colour of a storm as she padded after the other RiverClan cats. The medicine cat apprentice's already bad mood got worse when she saw that ShadowClan hadn't arrived yet. Impatiently she sat, blocking her eats from the leaders' discussion. Finally, Jaystar brought up a point of interest: the new deputy. It was Ripplefrost, apparently. Blackpaw didn't cheer Ripplefrost's name, and instead focused her attention on Brokenheart. The somewhat annoying WindClan medicine cat seemed to helping her, she noticed, so Blackpaw once again switched her focus.
&. jagged peak
Jaggedfang traveled with the other RiverClan cats, trying to keep calm in a situation that Jaggedfang could only describe as not calm. His light blue eyes scanned the group of gathered cats anxiously, searching for ShadowClan cats, wanting to leave this forsaken place as soon as possible. He paid close attention to the conservation between the leaders, but the most interesting announcement to him was about the new deputy. "Ripplefrost!" he cheered, though his voice had an break in it because he was uneasy about this whole business. What if the Clans got lost? What if he died on the way? What if everything went wrong?
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #3 on Apr 23, 2008, 7:22pm »
Lightningstar looked down at the medicine cat. His spirits lowered slightly. Of course, there'd always be cats that counted himself as lesser than the other leaders. He was youngest, and newest. "I swear by StarClan, by Stripedrain, by my own kits, that StarClan sent me this message and told me to lead the clans to their new home. I swear it." HIs eyes shone in the light of the rising moon, and thoughts ran through his head. StarClan, show these cats that I'm telling the truth! he begged. Then he heard a soft breath at his side.
The tom looked down. There stood Hopekit, his other daughter. She, the youngest cat in the clearing besides Brokenheart's kits, padded to the front of the rock. "Cats of the Clans, I am Hopekit of StarClan. I helped to give the message to him. Peease, believe me, you shall all perish if you don't leave." Her pale ywllow pelt brushed against the black one of her father's. He murmured, "Thank you." in his ear, and saw Hopekit flash a smile at a shocked Stripedrain. Then his daughter was gone.
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #4 on Apr 23, 2008, 6:23pm »
the last time i freaked out;;
Ravenclaw froze as she placed down the herbs she'd gotten from Shattereddiamond. "So it's true." She growled. "Brokenheart, name your kits after you eat these herbs. I need to go demand why this is actually real. I thought they were just joking!" She rolled her eyes and turned to leave. "Shattereddiamond, help her clean her kits and make sure she eats every single herb in front of her. I know you're no medicine cat, but you could at least do that much. Also, give her a little catmint. It's over there, with the delicious minty smell. Congratulations, by the way. For a rookie, seven kits in your first litter is surprising. If you ever need any help, come to me. We should chat later." Ravenclaw padded away, standing and glaring up at Lightningstar. "So you weren't lying. But, as you are the newest leader, should we really trust you? So the Twolegs are trying to kill us. Maybe Eaglestar would be a better leader for the journey. Maybe Frozenstar. But I certainly don't trust you to lead us safely to safety. Plus, your little 'friend' here Jaystar is the father of seven kits that were just born. How is Brokenheart supposed to travel? How are the kits supposed to travel? Answer me that, then maybe I'll stop protesting. Maybe.
i just kept looking down;;
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Four fallen leaders will rise, their paws hold the key to the skies
A great evil lurks within the Clans' lake home and they are none the wiser that it lives among them. All they know is that the skies grow darker, prey is running low, and cats who were once good friends are now at each other's throats.
StarClan, for seasons, has known of this danger and is ready to fight it off. Four brave leaders from the Clans' great past have stood up to defend their kin. They're the founders of the Clans we know today: Thunder, Shadow, Wind & River. They will be born into new kit bodies with dangerous powers they will soon discover.
The four kits; Loudkit, Wolfkit, Thymekit, and Galekit must discover and master their powers before the evil becomes too strong. Once they come together nothing can stand in their way. But can four small kits be the answer?
Join us in our epic journey of an attempt to save the clans, one kit at a time.
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #6 on Apr 23, 2008, 2:13pm »
Lightningstar nodded to FRozenstar. "At last. Now, I tell all the clans what StarClan has said." He had so anticipated this moment, the moment of telling all the clans that they were now going to have to leave. But he hesitated. Was he doing the right thing? Shaking off the feeling, he continued. "We all know that the twolegs are poisoning the prey. StarClan have offered a solution. They told me that we must leave the forest and find a new home, or we will all perish." He stared around, waiting for their reaction.
Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #9 on Apr 22, 2008, 7:45pm »
[ooc] ok, here we go.
Frozenstar gathered his cats behind him, sitting down and staring each of them in the eye. "ShadowClan, we are about to take a great Journey. As your leader, I must keep you all together and make sure no harm comes to you. But we must stick together and remain strong. I want you all to remember that you are strong, ShadowClan warriors." He turned, and loped down the slope. "ShadowClan is here!" he announced. He padded up to where the other leaders stood, "Sorry I'm so late. It was difficult to get the kits and queens moving. But we are here. Has StarClan said anything to you? They are silent to Moonfeather..." Frozenstar chided himself for giving up that precious information, but he thought it could be worth it.
Re: Affiliate « Result #12 on Apr 20, 2008, 2:50pm »
The first banner you have up, the code is messed up. You need to add another " after the board url.
Name of Site: Moonlit Dreams;; {Fantasy Wolf RP} Url of Site:http://dreamsxmoon.proboards74.com/index.cgi Username on Site: admin Veiwname on Site: Aydan Is our banner up?: Yes Banner Preveiw: Banner Code: <a href='http://dreamsxmoon.proboards74.com/index.cgi'><img src='http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f22/sakitu_frost/moonlitdreams.gif' border='0' alt='Moonlit Dreams ' title='Moonlit Dreams ' /></a> Quick Info: After centuries of wolves searching for a place to call safe, they have found their blessing - Sorrento; a place older than any alive, with magic flowing deep within its depths. Hidden from humans, protected from natural disasters, Sorrento seems like what everyone has been looking for. But is it? Two packs make their home here; Samara and Nahal. Loners and rogues wander within the unclaimed lands as well, hoping to have finally found somewhere to stay for good. But Sorrento isn't full of just ordinary wolves - elementals and other powerful beings have come here as well. A peace has settled over the land, but it is gradually unraveling to reveal something far more sinister than anyone could have anticipated...
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Re: Brokenheart's kits! « Result #16 on Apr 20, 2008, 10:21am »
Yay. xD But one of them will have to get... uhh... amnesia? Is that it? Where you forget everything? And he'll be like, 'ohmygosh whoamI and what'supwiththistwincatdude?' xD
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Re: Brokenheart's kits! « Result #18 on Apr 20, 2008, 8:53am »
oh em gee on Ex I actually have two cats named Fog and Pounce who are twins that don't know each other. xD I want those two, and you can have Blizzard. I'll edit the post! And I want Running <3
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SSBB! 8D « Result #20 on Apr 19, 2008, 3:01pm »
Super Smash Brothers Brawl for Wii! It's really fun, you should play.
Female
Gender color: Actual info My info
Pit- the protagonist in Kid Icarus, he is in my top two. His Sacred Bow of Palutena is two blades, which he can disconnect and connect as he wishes. He commands the Centurions, who are the guardians of the Goddess of Light for his Final Smash. When he summons the guardians, an image of the Goddess lingers in the sky for a few seconds, then fades away. I actually thought it was his mother or something at first. xD He can also fly, since he's got wings, and when he's falling off a cliff and he's helpless, unable to fly.... you can get glowing blue wings for... ten seconds? Then you come back up and live! I call them good wings, simply because they do me good.
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #21 on Apr 19, 2008, 11:06am »
to turn this around;;
Jaystar followed the other leader's gaze to the three cats. He sighed. Brokenheart hated him, and no one trusted him. The RiverClan cats were slowly gathering. "StarClan, look down and approve of my choice." He paused. Before he stated the name, he sought the pelt out and kept him focused. "Ripplefrost shall be the new deputy of RiverClan." But would StarClan hear and approve his choice?
i know what's at stake;;
"Ripplefrost! Ripplefrost!" Jaystar watched as Brokenheart cheered, stepping forward to nuzzle the new deputy in congratulations. His pelt bristled, and he forced himself not to lunge down and tear them apart. Jealousy racked through his heart, but he understood that she didn't love Ripplefrost, riiight?
i know i've let you down;;
but if you give me a chance;;
Brokenheart suddenly gasped. Pain streaked through her body, and she stumbled backward. "Help..!" She mewed faintly. "H-help!" Her whole body was on fire. The black medicine cat appeared at her side from nowhere, demanding her to answer the most absurd questions. "Are you pregnant? Can you walk? Follow me, you are giving birth." Brokenheart didn't argue, limping after the cat into some bushes.
and give me a break;;
i'll keep us together;;
Ravenclaw licked Brokenheart's pelt. "Now, lay down and push." It took her an antagonizing moment, but she successfully relieved herself of one kit. They repeated the process a suprising six times, but now seven healthy kits nursed on Broken's belly. "Who is the father?" Ravenclaw asked softly. "Jaystar." Her voice was steady, over the shock of the random kits. Raven sprinted away, running toward the leader.
whatever it takes;;
Ravenclaw leaped in front of Jaystar, her nose half an inch from his. "Do you know what you have done?! Now Brokenheart is unfit for the move." Her fur bristled, temper flaring and pushing Jaystar backward. "You fool! Who is going to carry all seven of your kits, eh?" The medicine cat whipped her tail, listening to his feeble apology. "I-I'm sorry. I didn't know--" Ravenclaw interrupted. "Didn't know? How could you not know?! You are impossible!" She whirled around, storming off the rock and back to the queen.
oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh, ohhhh;;
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #24 on Apr 18, 2008, 5:50pm »
ooc; please hurry, I want to try and move soon.
LIghtningstar nodded. "Of course. We're all in this together. I will support you." His still-young claws scraped eagerly against the ground, waiting for Frozenstar. "Where on earth could ShadowClan be? Surely Sprintingwind isn't lost!" he muttered under his breath. Sprintingwind was in fact older and wiser than himself, so he should be back by now with ShadowClan. He looked around the clearing, seeking relief, however slight, from his anxiety. Was hedoing the right thing? Finally, his eyes sought out Stripedrain. He saw her smile. He saw his son, Cloudkit, lick Brookkit's head as she stumbled and fell. The sight of them made him purr as loud as he'd ever purred, and his eyes glow with pride.
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Jaggedfang--RiiV3R. « Result #27 on Apr 17, 2008, 5:19am »
Name: Jaggedfang
Gender: Male
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Warrior
Quick Description: A light brown tabby tom with a twisted canine tooth.
Description: Jaggedfang is a small tabby tom, despite his somewhat harsh name. His fur is slick, but he lacks much power, and therefore isn't the strongest swimmer in the world. His fur is a light brown colour, just a bit browner and darker than cream, and stripes decorate his short coat of fur. His eyes are light blue, just as his fur is light brown; his right canine tooth, however, is far more interesting. It is twisted, thus granting him the name of Jaggedfang.
Personality: Supportive and good-natured, Jaggedfang is quiet and doesn't doubt others' decisions. Surprise is rare, as is anger, but Jaggedfang can get angry. When he does, it's nothing to be scared of; Jaggedfang is good at controlling himself and will not usually lash out or snap at cats. Jaggedfang's main weak point is that he isn't very bold, and therefore he often gets himself into situations where he is too quiet and meek to speak up. While Jaggedfang does have a bold side and will sacrifice his life for his Clan, he is often very quiet, preferring to let the brave fools step up and get themselves killed.
History: Jaggedfang was born to Sunwind and Mudtree as Jaggedkit, for even then his tooth was twisted. Jaggedkit and his sisters Echokit and Crowkit were fairly normal kits. Easily excited and always energetic, the three romped around the nursery every day, until one of them had to quit. A disease was raging through RiverClan at the time, and Crowkit caught it at three moons. Quickly, Crowkit passed away to join StarClan. Mudtree, who had also caught the sickness, joined his daughter among the stars a moon later. Echokit was still eager, but Jaggedkit was much quieter now.
Jaggedkit and Echokit became Jaggedpaw and Echopaw at six moons. Jaggedpaw enjoyed their mentors, always supporting them and informing them of Echopaw's latest misadventure. Echopaw, however, only chatted with Sunwind, her mother, and Coyotepaw, an older RiverClan apprentice. Jaggedpaw's friend circle and Echopaw's friend circle broke apart when Coyotepaw and Echopaw's mentor were slaughtered by an enemy patrol. Coyotepaw's mentor was given to Echopaw, but the two did not last long. The sickness that had killed Crowkit and Mudtree came again, killing Echopaw and her new mentor.
Jaggedpaw became Jaggedfang at twelve moons. His mentor, an aged senior warrior, retired, and the elder died fourteen moons later. Sunwind and Jaggedfang fought off a fox a moon after Jaggedfang's former mentor's passing, which cost the last of Jaggedfang's cgroup of friends and family their lives. Now, at twenty-eight moons, Jaggedfang has seen more than two years go by, and, while still relatively quiet and good-natured, he is always ready for more.
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Re: Affiliate « Result #28 on Apr 16, 2008, 9:15pm »
Here's another for us =D
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Oh, and the '...erpaw/UGH.gi....' is because it took me like eight times to upload it before it worked. xD
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #30 on Apr 13, 2008, 7:45pm »
i'll do whatever it takes;;
Jaystar hesitated, his mind focused on the white she-cat in the crowd. His ears were deaf to Lightningstar's words, and it took him a moment to realize the other tom had spoken. "What?" he murmured distractedly. "Oh. Yes, I will, if you help support me as leader." Jaystar sighed. "Few cats in my Clan believe me." His eyes were on Brokenheart again as he watched her meander around, glaring at some black medicine cat that was sorting herbs. "Hold on, Lightningstar." Jay wasn't sure the leader could hear him, as he had spoken so quietly. He bounded away, but at the look that Broken gave him he slowed. She turned away from him and stalked off, tail waving in the air. "Great. Even one of my best warriors hates me." Jaystar muttered, then he returned to his spot by Lightningstar.
to turn this around;;
Brokenheart turned back around as Jaystar went to the other leaders. She sighed. The denseheaded cat had almost his whole Clan against him. The least she could do was be kind to him, even though he probably felt too rejected at this point. She rolled her eyes. That tom was too immature to be a leader, and he still needed to appoint a deputy. Broken tensed as her eyes flitted back to the cat with the white paw, who was now facing the sky with a haunted expression on her face, mouthing some words.
i know what's at stake;;
and i know i've let you down;;
Ravenclaw felt a prickling on her pelt as she continued with the herbs. Her eyes longed to stare up at the sky, but she didn't want to stop sorting. Finally she turned, feeling eyes staring at her. A single star seemed to be brighter than the sun at that moment, and she fixed her eyes on it. A huge gust of wind from StarClan carried a message: Blood shall become one, fates shall combine. Hatred shall fall, battle shall strike. Realization will criticize, and darkness will fall. Ravenclaw felt like a tree had rammed her in the face. She staggered backward and nearly fell over, nosed up by that same white RiverClan cat. For another split second she thought she recognized her, then it left.
and if you give me a chance;;
"Go away." Ravenclaw muttered, shouldering away the slightly larger cat. Her face betrayed how troubled she was, causing the cat with mismatched eyes to stay. "What's your name?" she asked Ravenclaw. "Why should I tell you? I mean, it's not like we're family." Ravenclaw felt like she was reassuring herself more than she was the RiverClanner. "I'm Brokenheart. My si--" Ravenclaw had dug her claws into the top of Brokenheart's paw when she almost said that dreadful word, 'sisters'. Ravenclaw turned back to her herbs. "I don't care, now go away. And before you ask, I'm perfectly fine. A medicine cat always recieves prophecies before the whole forest moves." Ravenclaw was sure to load her words with sarcasm. "Of course I'm not fine! Are you happy? Now leave me alone!" Ravenclaw slashed at Brokenheart's face, claws impacting on skin. The white cat backed away, mixed emotions in her eyes, then fled. "Good riddance." Ravenclaw muttered under her breath, returning to her herbs.
and give me a break;;
i'll keep us together;;
Shadowcrystal slowly stepped into Fourtrees, freezing at the sight of so many cats. Just then she remembered why Lightningstar had brought them there; they were moving. Oh, this was sooo not good. Her father had never left the forest. As soon as they stepped somewhere that he hadn't known of, her vision would blur and she would be as much use as a blind cat. A blind cat. In that instant, she remembered that ThunderClan actually had a blind apprentice: Hawkpaw. Shadowcrystal scanned the clearing, looking for the brown cat. Oh no. She wasn't there! The warrior rolled her eyes and cursed under her breath, then turned and fled back toward camp. Her vision fuzzed slightly, but she shook it away and told herself, It's bad enough to have to go fetch a blind cat, but how will we get back if I'm blind, too?
i know you;;
Shadowcrystal burst into camp, having cleared her vision again. "Hawkpaw, come on. I'm sorry Lightningstar forgot about you, but I'll lead you back." The only time she wasn't a jerk was when she was talking to the cat that she had a little in common with: both had eye issues. She placed her tail on Hawkpaw's shoulder, then led her slowly to Fourtrees. Suprisingly, Hawkpaw didn't resist or complain to being helped. She must be too annoyed at Lightningstar to really care. After a few minutes they were back in the clearing, and both sat midway between the Great Rock and the trees.
deserve much better;;
but remember the time i told you the way that i felt;;
Shattereddiamond padded after WindClan to Fourtrees. She had no idea why the Clan was here, but she'd followed her leader faithfully and ended up at this place. Cats were milling around, waiting for one of the leaders to speak. Glancing around, the warrior spotted Ravenclaw working at her herbs and being pestered by some white cat, then slashing her nose and watching her flee. Shattereddiamond headed over to the medicine cat, instantly being welcomed and shown which herbs went where. That was easy. She thought, glancing sideways back at the white cat with a little red on her muzzle. Mismatched eyes. She pondered, then went back to work.
that i'd be lost without you;;
never find myself;;
Silverbreeze, on ShadowClan patrol, meandered into the clearing with Butterflywings at her side. Both stared in astonishment at the gathered cats, and Butterflywings sat in suprise. "Should we tell ShadowClan?" she asked. Silverbreeze didn't answer. Three of the Clans were here, and faint ThunderClan scent had passed the border. "I think they're telling ShadowClan themselves." She murmured, eyes wide. Why were the Clans here?
let's hold onto each other, above everything else;;
start over, start over;;
Jaystar gulped, looking around nervously. "Before we begin speaking, I need to, er, appoint a deputy." He felt like fire was burning inside his belly. "I don't think ShadowClan would care if they weren't here for it..." The tom took a step forward, so he was at the highest point on the rock. "Er, cats of RiverClan, please gather here beneath the.. Great Rock for a Clan meeting." His pelt tingled as he called a Clan meeting when he technically should call the Gathering meeting, but he dismissed the thought. "The time has come for me to appoint a deputy."
i'll do whatever it takes;;
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #31 on Apr 13, 2008, 6:35pm »
Lightningstar paced restlessly on top of the Great Rock. He gave his chest a few quick, self-consious licks. This was the first time he'd been up here, and the view was much different. Soon Eaglestar and Jaystar had leaped up beside him. Where was Frozenstar? What was taking him and ShadowClan so long? Eaglestar was frowning in annoyance and Jaystar was gazing athis clan. But then the other new leader spoke to him. "Oh... ThunderClan is doing well, aside from the sickness. Jaystar, StarClan sent me a message and told me that we needed to find a new home, or else we'd die out. Will you support me when I tell the clans?" He knew Jaystar, younger and friendlier than Eaglestar, would probably listen to him better than the WindClan she-cat. At the moment, Eaglestar would probably bite his head off if he tried to talk to her.
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Shadowcrystal [+] ThunderClan « Result #33 on Apr 13, 2008, 5:44pm »
Name: Shadowcrystal.
Gender: female.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: warrior, twenty six moons.
Quick Description: black with crystal-white eyes.
Description: Shadowcrystal is a completely black cat, other than her nose and eyes. Her irises are a bright, near-white yellow, and they sparkle in the light. Her nose is also white, the only thing that makes her unlike her mother. She has a fresh wound on one front leg from a fox attack, which causes her to limp. She also has a line of scars down her black belly, from a cat trying to rip her fur off.
Personality: Shadowcrystal has several problems, other than her denseheartedness. She was born almost like a reincarnation of her father, who had died days before her birth. Oftentimes her vision randomly blurs, and she needs to 'trigger' a memory from her father's life. She undoubtedly hates this, because it messes up her life. Sometimes it helps her a tiny little bit, but mostly it makes her want to die. When she doesn't have to fight to see, she enjoys taunting other cats and scaring away their prey. Yes, she is a troublesome jerk.
History:when she was a kit. The first day of her life, her mother refused to feed Shadowkit. She nearly starved to death, but little did she know that she was a female replica of her dead father, and her mother was terrified. Shadowkit was a rejected kit, the youngest of her litter and least likely survive through leafbare. However, as greencough suddenly struck two days after her birth, both her brothers caught it first and both died. After that her mother and her only sister quickly died from weakness. There were no other queens in the nursery, and the Clan was scared for Shadowkit. Each day they had to chew a little bit of freshkill until it was practically liquid, but she soon grew teeth and chewed it on her own. So began her first moon of her life.
when she was a kit. Shadowkit soon began to have eye problems. No one in the Clan understood why. Her vision blurred randomly often, and rarely did she manage to trigger a memory before she wanted to go crazy. Living became a near-impossible chore for her, and she fought to see and live. Instead, greencough caught her and for thirteen seconds she stopped breathing. Luckily she recovered with her life, but the memories kept attacking her. Soon she accidentally stepped into one several times a day, getting flashes of what her father had done there in her blurred eyes. Shadowkit despised it, and before the next few moons passed she became a dense, unwilling kit and mostly tried to sleep her life away.
an apprentice at last! Shadowpaw grew faster than she'd expected. She was now the newest apprentice, and also immediately got excused from training whenever her eyes blurred. She had few friends and was called 'freak' more than she was called 'Shadowpaw'. But, she didn't let this take her down. She lied to her mentor when he asked if she was having difficulties seeing, acting as if the problematic issue was gone. Cats began believing her, and more slowly began to become her friend. But then....
an apprentice at last! Shadowpaw was invited to a fight. She was faced with cats she had never met before, and her eyes suddenly clouded over, worse than before. It appeared her father had never fought these cats at this place, and it wouldn't let up like usual. She accidentally tried to kill her own Clanmate, the secret that she had been faking it released. She was lucky everyone got over it quickly.
yes, a warrior. Shadowcrystal finally became a warrior. Her life went on as before: go on regular patrols and battles, if her eyes act up she goes back to camp and is excused from Clan duty until her eyes focus. It began to get boring, and she forced herself to stay during blurry battles, finding her way around with scent. And so, her life went on.
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #34 on Apr 12, 2008, 10:39am »
i'll do whatever it takes;;
Hawkpaw's eyes turned to slits. Her leader must have forgotten about the blind cat in the Clan, because he was sprinting away at full speed. Her pelt prickled, and she muttered, "Fine. Leave me here to die, the blind cat never pulls through." The freshness of the Clan's scents was slowly fading as she was left alone in the camp, listening to everyone else leave. She had never gotten the chance to go to Fourtrees, so the terrain would be too unfamiliar for her to trek alone. Carefully planning each footstep, she followed Lightningstar's scent, though it was faint from so many other cats walking upon it. It didn't appear anyone had stayed for her. Having been paying attention to her Clan's scents and only her Clan's scents, she nearly rammed into a tree.
to turn this around;;
Hawkpaw unsheathed her claws, frustrated. Lightningstar wasn't a very good leader. She turned and found her way by scent back to her camp, laying on the ground to die. The familiar camp scents were slowly disappearing like her Clan, and like in that fable she'd heard about as a kit, with ShadowClan driving out WindClan and two brave ThunderClan warriors brought them back. But, that had been when whoever told her had been a kit, being told themselves, by someone who had been a kit for the story too. The apprentice raised her head to the sky, crying out in desperation. Lightningstar could leave her, the seemingly helpless, stupid cat who didn't deserve life.
i know what's at stake;;
and i know i've let you down;;
Ravenclaw's fur bristled. Why should the Clans have to move? A soft pelt brushed up beside her's. She hissed, pushing the cat away with one paw. For a split second the mismatched eyes looked familiar, but she tore the thought away and glared at the RiverClanner. "Why are you here?" She snarled, unsheathing her claws. "The rest of stupid RiverClan hasn't arrived. Wait for your Clan, mousebrain. And keep away from me." Ravenclaw turned back to her herbs, plucking some new leaves from a tree above. She wrapped the leaves around different assortments of herbs, glancing around to find cats to help her carry the packages. The RiverClan cat was still behind her; she could sense it.
and if you give me a chance;;
Ravenclaw whirled around. "Didn't you hear what I told you? Get lost, cat!" Both of the white cat's mismatched eyes stayed focused on Raven's white paw. Her mouth was slightly open, but she stood and backed away. Ravenclaw rolled her eyes then got back to work. What was that cat's problem?
believe that i can change;;
i'll keep us together;;
Brokenheart kept her gaze focused on the white paw. She remembered many moons ago, that faceless black kitten that she had known as her sister, with white halfway up one leg. But, she daren't speak. She knew her sisters were dead. Turning, ashamed, Broken padded away. That cat was not her sister, and never would be. Jaystar appeared from the trees, Brackenwhisker panting beside him. "Go back to your Clan," she heard him say, "And let them know RiverClan has come." Jaystar nodded to the warrior as he obeyed, then glanced invitingly at Brokenheart.
whatever it takes;;
The femme quickly averted her gaze. Jaystar had been so kind to her lately, but dense to just about everyone else but Mistybreeze. Why? She was just a friend to him... right? He couldn't actually be.... in love with her! But, why wouldn't she stare him down? Was she admitting to loving him too? Brokenheart flicked her gaze at him for a second, sighting confusion and something else. "I feel sick." She lied. "I think I just saw my sister." Looking at Jaystar as if for approval, he rolled his eyes and sighed, "Such a nice cat gone to waste because of her sisters."
she said if we're gonna make this work;;
That was it. Broken's head flew up and she bristed. "What did you just say?" she bared her teeth, ready to attack her own leader. "What did you just say?!" she repeated, claws unsheathed, voice demanding. Jaystar gave her a satisfied smirk, holding up a paw and pressing it against her chest. Broken lowered her head and bit it, causing him to wince and whip it back to his body. "You keep your nose out of my business, Jaystar. My whole life disappeared when I was a kit. Maybe you should live it yourself to understand."
you gotta let me inside even though it hurts;;
don't have the broken parts that i need to see;;
Jaystar scowled as Brokenheart stalked off. He gestured with his tail for the rest of his Clan to follow after, moving behind them to Lightningstar. "Welcome, Lightningstar. I'm sorry about your loss. I went through the same thing less than a moon ago, but I was never appointed deputy." He glanced sheepishly at his paws. "How is your Clan?"
she said like it or not, it's the way it's gotta be;;
Part of him longed to go back to Brokenheart, but his paw still hurt from that bite. He briskly licked it twice, looking unsurely at the sky. For a split second it seemed as if they were lifting him off his paws and putting him next to the female he loved, but then it faded and the realization that he loved Brokenheart vanished.
you gotta love yourself if you can ever love me;;
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Re: [+] it iS tiME tO LeAVe [MOVING!!] « Result #35 on Apr 12, 2008, 7:05am »
ooc;; kako told me to take Eagle, so ya, here she is!
Eaglestar sat near the middle of camp, her eyes slitted with relaxation. She was watching Smearpaw and Smudgepaw play-fighting in front of the apprentices den, and she smiled softly. But she raised her head and opened her eyes. A scent! What was it? ThunderClan! She leaped to her paws and silenced the apprentices with a flick of her tail. Soon the ThunderClan cat padded into camp, breathing heavily. It was Icecloud. "What are you doing here?" she asked, glaring at him. "No trespassers."
"I'm not trespassing, not really!" Icecloud meowed, straightening. "I've come with a message from Lightningstar." But Eaglestar stopped him. "WHAT? Lightningstar? Does that mean Waterstar is dead?" Icecloud bowed his head, and that was awnser enough. But then he spoke again. "Lightningstar told me to ask you to come to a meeting at Fourtrees, and to bring your entire clan. He has a solution for the prey poisoning." Icecloud was silent now. Eaglestar rolled the thoughts over in her mind.
"Fine, we will come." she mewed gruffly. "Furystep, Ravenclaw, Smearpaw, and Smudgepaw, come over here. We're going to fourtrees." She led her small clan out of camp, Icecloud tagging along, towards fourtrees. Soon they reached the clearing. Lightningstar was sitting up on the Great Rock, and she leaped up beside him. "What's going on?" she growled. Glaring at him. "Why have you made my clan come all this way?" But the look she saw on his face made her know she'd have to wait.
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